copy(de): neutralise direct address + reduce panel headings + rewrite hero.sub #22
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DE-only editorial pass. Adds
overrideoverlay category for deliberate copy edits.DE-only editorial pass — neutralises every "euch/eure/euer/ihr" in the dict, rewrites the awkward hero.sub closing clause, and reduces the five hero.boards.{A..E} prose titles to short technical headings. EN strings keep prototype voice; a follow-up bilingual editorial pass can mirror the changes. - hero.sub closes with "Wir übernehmen das Mandat, bauen das Managementsystem auf und sichern die Lieferkette. So tief, wie der Reifegrad es verlangt. So übergeben, dass der Betrieb danach ohne uns weiterläuft." — replaces the prior sentence whose tail "der den morgigen trägt" read awkwardly. - hero.boards.{A..E}.title: full prose sentences reduced to subject headings (Annex A · Cluster A.5–A.8, Stage 1 · Klausel 4–10, ISMS-Performance · rolling 90 Tage, …). - hero.boards.A/D/E.breadcrumb: tightened to single-word headings. - approach.items[*].body, services.items[*].{tagline,lede,items[].t}, contact.body / contact.asideH4: every direct-address pronoun swapped for an impersonal subject. Drift: adds a fifth overlay category `override` to docs/overlays.md plus scripts/check-drift.mjs. 19 entries OV-025..OV-043 record each editorial deviation; `npm run check:drift` stays clean. Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.7 (1M context) <noreply@anthropic.com>